2014 Sensational Learners

Tuesday, July 31, 2012

My Weekend

In the weekend I went to my friends home and I played with her toys. Then I watched tv with her, then at night I ate at her home then we went home. The next day it was school.
By Vanessa

10 comments:

  1. well done and good work Vanessa.

    by Motu and Marcus.

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  2. Nice work Vanessa. You should had a great time at your friends house. Next time you should change your sentence starters and change home into house. :)

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  3. Great piece of writing Vanessa. I like reading your writing because you use your capitals and full stop. Next time you can do better then this. Keep it up.

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  4. Great piece of writing Vanessa I like your writing keep up the great work.

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  5. Wow Vanessa that is the cool weekend ever,I love the way you use full stop.
    Next time you can make your witting and longer.

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  6. Hi Vanessa I really like your Story about what you did in the weekends. I especially like how you put the writing in full. Keep up the great work Vanessa, From Sonya

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  7. Hi Vanessa I really like your story about what you did in the weekends. I like how you put the writing full. Keep up the fantastic good great work

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  8. Well done Vanessa! this is a very great piece of writing that you have done. I really like how you said you were at your friends house I wish I was there because it sound like fun. Keep up the great work Vanessa.

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  9. Well done Vanessa! this is a very great piece of writing that you have done. I really like how you said you were at your friends house I wish I was there because it sound like fun. Keep up the great work Vanessa.

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  10. Hi Vanessa I really like your story about what you did in the weekends. I like how you put the writing full. Keep up the fantastic good great work

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