well done and good work Vanessa.by Motu and Marcus.
Nice work Vanessa. You should had a great time at your friends house. Next time you should change your sentence starters and change home into house. :)
Great piece of writing Vanessa. I like reading your writing because you use your capitals and full stop. Next time you can do better then this. Keep it up.
Great piece of writing Vanessa I like your writing keep up the great work.
Wow Vanessa that is the cool weekend ever,I love the way you use full stop.Next time you can make your witting and longer.
Hi Vanessa I really like your Story about what you did in the weekends. I especially like how you put the writing in full. Keep up the great work Vanessa, From Sonya
Hi Vanessa I really like your story about what you did in the weekends. I like how you put the writing full. Keep up the fantastic good great work
Well done Vanessa! this is a very great piece of writing that you have done. I really like how you said you were at your friends house I wish I was there because it sound like fun. Keep up the great work Vanessa.