Awesome room 1. You people are good at drawing! Well Done!
Well done Audrey, you have done lovely art for your Mother.
Hi Briana,I like the way that you made a mothers day card by yourself and I like the picture of your mum.
Hi Viliami I liked your drawing.It reminded me of my old school.
Viliami I like the way you show love to your mother with your writing and drawing. She is going to love your letter I like your letter I also like your smile Viliami.
Hi,XavierI really like how you drew a picture about your mother and described what she looks like.Your writing and your picture remind me of when I was in room 1 writing a mothers day card for my mum.I think it would be helpful for you to use punctuation and making sure you writing makes scene.
Hi,Briana I really like how you told us what your mum does to make you feel comfortable and loved.Your writing reminds me of my mum because my mum hugs and kisses me just like your mum.I think it would be helpful if you use capital letters in the right place.Good job Briana!
Hi Rachel,I really like your Mother's day card your mum would like your picture that you made for her. Your writing for your mum is really good I know mum will really like the writing that you did for her.
Hi Tutei,I like your picture because it is colorful.I like how you said that your mum hugs you because that reminds me of my mum hugging me.