2014 Sensational Learners

Thursday, June 20, 2013

Room 2's Recount Writing

We are learning to write a recount. Here are some of our recounts about a time when we got hurt.





One day I went to Australia. I fell down. My feet were bleeding. My Nana put a plaster on my feet, I felt better. 
Helena





One day I was jumping on the trampoline. Then I was spinning around on the trampoline. I twisted my leg then I fell down. I was crying because my leg was hurt. My brother came to help me. Then I felt better.
 Laki






One day I was running to my bike I fell down on the floor my mum picked me up because I was crying. My mum said “are you alright?” My mum helped me. I felt better. 
Akesa







Yesterday we went to the library. We were looking at the animal books and water books and the fish books. Then we were looking at the game books. Then Mrs was reading Grandma McGarvey to us. Then Mrs told us to be quiet in the library. Chanel





One day I was spinning. I feel down. Because my elbow was sore I was crying. My brother came to help me then I was better. Etuale 

One day I jumped on the trampoline. I fell and my leg was bleeding. My aunty put a bandage on my leg. I felt better. Precious








One day I was running outside. I fell down on the ground. I got hurt on my knees. It was sore and I was crying. My sister came to help me to feel better. She picked me up and took me inside. She looked after me. I felt better. I said “thank you” to my sister. Makalita


One day I ran at the park. I fell down. I had a bleeding foot and arm. I cried and it was sore. My dad picked me up and helps me walk. I stopped crying and I felt better. 
Opeti





One day I was riding my bike. I fell down. I hurt myself I cried. My dad came to help me. My dad hugged me. I stopped crying and I felt happy. 
Angelyn 








One day I was walking. I fell down on my sister’s leg.
 Zahara








One day I ran outside fell on the path. My elbow was bleeding. It was sore. I was crying. My dad helped me. I felt better. 
Charis






One day I was jumping on the trampoline. I was on the edge then I fell down on the ground. Then I was crying. Then I went inside. I got hurt on my head. I was crying because my head was sore. My brother helped me to feel happy. 
Jerome



2 comments:

  1. WOW Helena I am so glad that you are writing about when we went to Australia. I like when you told all about when your foot was bleeding and our Nana helped your foot better. Maybe next time you can use some more words that you know really easy. I hope mum and dad see's your work.

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  2. Well done Room 2. You guys a brave and wonderful.
    I love Makalita because she is brave and feeling happy

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