Room 2's Recount Writing

We are learning to write a recount. Here are some of our recounts about a time when we got hurt.





One day I went to Australia. I fell down. My feet were bleeding. My Nana put a plaster on my feet, I felt better. 
Helena

One day I was jumping on the trampoline. Then I was spinning around on the trampoline. I twisted my leg then I fell down. I was crying because my leg was hurt. My brother came to help me. Then I felt better.
 Laki

One day I was running to my bike I fell down on the floor my mum picked me up because I was crying. My mum said “are you alright?” My mum helped me. I felt better. 
Akesa

Yesterday we went to the library. We were looking at the animal books and water books and the fish books. Then we were looking at the game books. Then Mrs was reading Grandma McGarvey to us. Then Mrs told us to be quiet in the library. Chanel

One day I was spinning. I feel down. Because my elbow was sore I was crying. My brother came to help me then I was better. Etuale 

One day I jumped on the trampoline. I fell and my leg was bleeding. My aunty put a bandage on my leg. I felt better. Precious

One day I was running outside. I fell down on the ground. I got hurt on my knees. It was sore and I was crying. My sister came to help me to feel better. She picked me up and took me inside. She looked after me. I felt better. I said “thank you” to my sister. Makalita

One day I ran at the park. I fell down. I had a bleeding foot and arm. I cried and it was sore. My dad picked me up and helps me walk. I stopped crying and I felt better. 
Opeti

One day I was riding my bike. I fell down. I hurt myself I cried. My dad came to help me. My dad hugged me. I stopped crying and I felt happy. 
Angelyn 

One day I was walking. I fell down on my sister’s leg.
 Zahara

One day I ran outside fell on the path. My elbow was bleeding. It was sore. I was crying. My dad helped me. I felt better. 
Charis

One day I was jumping on the trampoline. I was on the edge then I fell down on the ground. Then I was crying. Then I went inside. I got hurt on my head. I was crying because my head was sore. My brother helped me to feel happy. 
Jerome